Sunil Somalwar's comments to the draft v0.4 of ggMET paper:
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p1

6-13:

For theoretical reasons, and because of the observation....Tevatron, there is
compelling rationale to .... -> Theoretical motivation and the
observation...Tevatron provide compelling rationale to ...

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19: put comma between "phenomenology" and "we"

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28:

to have m_{Chi}>100 GeV -> to > 100 GeV

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38:

where X are other high ET..-> where X denote other high ET...

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47:

against instrumental backgrounds and non-collision sources-> of backgrounds
from instrumental and non-collision sources.

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50:

The strategy -> Our strategy

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51:

our search -> the search

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58-64:

Break up and rewrite the sentence (bad grammer).

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70:

their 4-momenta -> the 4-momenta.

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74: 
the three-level trigger -> the CDF three-level trigger.

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75:

..trigger, and the combined trigger selection efficiency is effectively 100%
efficient -> ..trigger. The combined trigger selection efficiency is effectively 100%.

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84:

This set of events is dominated.. -> The set of remaining events is dominated..

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p2

40:

where -> in which

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41: 

remove comma.

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47-52: 

Too long. Break up the sentence.

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81: 

requirements to inside the signal -> requirements to events inside the signal

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100:

on the photon ID -> in the photon ID

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p3:

34:

remove "rad".

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42:

What expectation? Suggest to remove "normalized to expectations".

==> Done as "The predicted HT distribution is shown... 

p4 

Fig.3:

at the end of the sentence in the caption: favored in cosmologically
consistent models -> favored by cosmological models.

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7-8:

Remove "by scaling the expected number of background events"

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Reference
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[14] Sugget to change the text to: Photons with second highest ET or narrow
jets that occur in few towers and have few tracks, can be mismeasured if they
are located close to the ....

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[21] Wouldn't the NIM article by Tom Junk be a better reference?

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[22] remove "use" in the second line.

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General Commnets
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A few sentences, such as this one, with several commas, that are needlessly
too long and could be broken up, and say the most important part at the end,
the authors might want to look out for.

==>Done.