PRL notified us our draft is too long and shortening to 460 lines or less is required. The current draft has 476 lines, which exceeds the limit for PRL (460 lines). So we reduces lines in main text, captions in Figures and comments in Refs. The changes are based on version 4.0 with line number in double column: ------ P1, line 37 "..gaugino pairs are produced and decay to the..." -> "..gaugino pairs are produced and quickly decay to the..." ------ P1, line 52-59 Completely removed. ------ P1, line 62-66 "....inside a superconducting solenoid magnet that operates at 1.4 T. A drift chamber (COT) with 96 layters of sense wires measures the z position, time of the ppar interaction, and the momenta of charged particles." -> "....that measures the z position and time of the ppar interaction, and the momenta of charged particles inside a superconducting solenoid magnet." ------ P1, line 66-67 "The calorimeter consists of projective towers with electromagnetic..." -> "The calorimeter consists of electromagnetic..." ----- P2, line 43 Ref [15] moves to line 25, after METMODEL. ----- P3, Figure 1 (total ET of photons, jets, and MET) is removed. ----- P3, line 67 "..reach of ~ 160 GeV at a lifetime well below 1 ns." -> "..reach of ~ 160 GeV." ----- P5, Figure 3 "... the limit from ALEPH/LEP......up to 1 ns." -> "... the limit found in [10,17]." ----- P5, Ref[15] "Photons with second....." is removed. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Re: LK12305 Search for supersymmetry with gauge-mediated breaking in diphoton events with missing transverse energy at CDF II by T. Aaltonen, J. Adelman, B. \'{A}lvarezGonz\'{a}lez, et al. Dear Dr. Lee, We have received your manuscript, but estimate that its length exceeds the limit for Physical Review Letters. Details appear on the enclosed form. We will take no further action until you provide a version that will fit within four pages. (This corresponds to 460 lines in print.) Please submit the revised manuscript in a double-spaced, single-column format. Our "Guidelines For Estimating Length" rules may aid you in comparing your manuscript to our length limit. These are available at http://prl.aps.org/info/authors.html under "Manuscript Preparation" and "PRL Length Worksheets" Thank you for your attention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Journal Services Physical Review Letters Email: prl@ridge.aps.org Fax: 631-591-4141 http://prl.aps.org/ Physics - spotlighting exceptional research: http://physics.aps.org/ LENGTH CHECK DATA (New 02/07) Manuscript No. LK12305 First Author Aaltonen Your manuscript is too long. Shortening to 460 lines or less is required before editorial consideration. Figure Label Width Height Picas Percent Cols Total Lines 1 1 38 36 19 0.50 1.0 18 2 2 38 36 19 0.50 1.0 18 3 3 38 32 19 0.50 1.0 16 LINE COUNTS Text lines 424 (Includes title, abstract, byline, pacs receipt date, text, acknowledgment, captions, and, references.) Equations 0 Tables 0 Figures 52 TOTAL 476 (Maximum length is 460) Author to supply: _X_ Abstract of no more than 600 characters including spaces. ___ Original Figure(s) ____________________ with ___ finer and/or larger lettering to prevent its filling in when figure is reduced. Minimum lettering size for the enclosed figures is __________. COMMENTS: Manuscript: None Tables and captions: None Figures: None FORMS AND MEMOS: Please see the following memos: http://forms.aps.org/author/lengthguide-prl.pdf Length Guidelines for Physical Review Letters