Sunil Bortoletto's comments to the first draft (v0.3-double space version) of ggMET paper:
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Title:
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Search for Gauge-Mediated Supersymmetry-Breaking Events in the gg+Missing
Transverse Energy Final State at CDF II
: Remove "Events".

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Abstract:
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suggestions:

- a gauge medidated...-> gauge mediated

==> Done.

- a world-best limit -> the world-best limit

==> Done.

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Text:
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p1

23: Met Model -> Find a better way to name it with different font style.

==> Done.

p2

14-17: Break up the sentence, which is too long.

==> Done.

p3

8: Event reconstruction pathologies in SM events -> Reconstruction pathologies
in SM events

==> Done.

29: Make this sentence passive: The Met-significance ....is shown in Figure 1.

==> We originally wrote that way, but this was suggested by Sunil's comments.

p4

Figure 1: The last sentence in the caption should be in the text.

==> Done.

p5

1: luminosity -> with uncertainty

==> the luminosity, the acceptance and the background estimates with the
systematic uncertainties -> the luminosity, the acceptance and the background
estimates with their systematic uncertainties